I'm still more or less in love with these, but I really think you need to expand them conceptually - give them a why. The last one in particular has pathos, but I dunno, I want to see these very mechanical images connecting to some idea on a more emotional level. I think that driving a wedge in the gap in that manner might result in some very powerful work.
I'm still more or less in love with these, but I really think you need to expand them conceptually - give them a why. The last one in particular has pathos, but I dunno, I want to see these very mechanical images connecting to some idea on a more emotional level. I think that driving a wedge in the gap in that manner might result in some very powerful work.
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